Tuesday, October 19, 2010

elegy for beowulf

High the height of Grendel’s head

Murdering maw, payer of warrior’s wages

Bones broken for their braveness.

He, horror of Heorot, bloodied the bright banquets.

Head of hell, Dane-destroyer.

Brave the blood in Beowulf’s veins.

Salvation to strangers, God-given charity,

Strength revolutionary.

Far from Geatland sailed he, his goal framed gallantly.

Veins valorous, noble man.

Fool the fiend, to seek to strive

With that great Geat. Too late! Far flown the time to flee.

Yet ran he, leaving, they write,

An arm. An arm, ripped from its rest by Geat so brave.

Strife-sacked, Blood-biter ran dead.

Good the Geat who sailing home

Brought glory to his king with great gifts and stories

Handsome to hear and behold.

Triumphant over evil, yet humble was he.

Home from Heorot, the destined king.

Long the length of time he served

Protecting his people, vanquishing the vermin

Of Cain’s cursed loins. The dragon,

Gold-greedy, wreaked havoc, angry as a lion,

Served burnt fields and fright to Geatland.

Right the ruler who stands to fight.

But savage snapping snake, fooler of Eve, that demon,

Knows much of inflicting pain.

Heavy the toll of the blows, loud the battle din.

Fight on, may angels lead you.

Dark the day when brave men bow

Abandoned by friends, forsaken by the trusted.

Fighting weary and weakened,

The fiery flower of youth fallen and faded

Bow to weight of age and time.

Oh my king, my lord,

You’ll not fight alone!

I’m weak and young, the least of your host.

But to you, my lord, I’ll run to your aid.

Stand steady, my lord,

You’ll not fight alone.

Gone the Geat, my lord, my liege.

The snake struck shoulder with foul fangs; his days were spent.

Cries of anguish tore the night.

The lizard, dead by Beowulf’s blow, healed not the split,

Liege lord, nor the split in my heart.

Oh my king, my lord,

You’ll not fight alone!

I am weak and young, the least of your host.

But for you, my lord, I’ll fight for your cause.

Steady me, my lord,

I’ll not fight alone.

3 comments:

  1. AWESOME alliteration! I mean that literally: I am in awe. I tried to write an Anglo-Saxon dirge for one of my stories a while back (the one inspired by Beowulf) and I could never quite get the meter and alliteration right.

    I really love the way that you move beyond the allegory in the last few lines. This is both beautiful and moving. Thank you for sharing.

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  2. thanks!! i kinda made up the meter...lol its 7 12 7 12 7, last word of first line and first word of last line are the same, and the middle 3 lines end with the same letter....haha my way of giving it some form but not making it too poetry-phoetry. :)

    thanks for your comment :)

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  3. okay, so apparently my comment didn't post, but i basically said you are amazing. i just read it aloud to my roommate....your alliteration is incredible. i LOVED it, so beautiful and i especially loved the end. so awesome, you did a really great job. thank you for posting it, i will bookmark it so i can look at it all the time.

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